somewhere the mosaic of a setting sun
that you and i have been witness too
but i don’t know you and you
wax along with the moon
somewhere between milling crowds and
billowing breeze our paths have crossed
traveling side by side, but
strangers we remain to distant shores
a bench in the park longs for your return
and i traipse through life like the sunflower does
maybe you’ve been the haunting eyes
i spied in the market place ages ago
but if you don’t tell me your name ..i’ll never know
Evocative words coupled with exotic photos – love can be elusive. Beautifully written, as always!
This is very nice… Lovely shot as well.
And it’s so good to have you back..❤❤❤
Good to have you back too! By the way, I am shooting a few chai shops..
Awww…finally…this I have got to see 😀
Hi kismet, so romantic! I think that it is about being in love with ourselves,with the real one hidden inside, I like the market part, sometimes when we least expected we are the true selves, only for one second maybe. And your photos are always so gorgeous!
You are so so correct about that ❤❤❤written with a view that one of my selves must be out there 🌸🌸🌸
💐💐💐💐thank you so much ..I love what you’ve written 🌾🍃🌾🍃🌾🍃🌾
Your words inspired some others…my latest..Tricks! Thanks for the prompt!
‘maybe you’ve been the haunting eyes
i spied in the market place ages ago’
Apart from you, no one here I know could have written these lines. Your posts scream emotions, I think you are a person always in love with something or someone 😀
The picture was amazing with the sharp eyes piercing the onlooker.
When I see the title I remember an album song by Album song by Alisha Chinoy, ‘Ishq ka kasoor nahi’ which has the same line in it but in Hindi. Check it out if you haven’t 🙂
Have a great day.
Thank you anoop…I shall go listen to the song ❤❤❤
This is beautiful
🌺❤🌺❤🌺❤🌺thank you
Thank you so much ❤🍃❤🍃❤🍃❤
” wax along with the moon” …oh…it evokes an unknown pain in my mind… wonderful lines Kismet…..a great wordsmith you’re… 🙂
….and the picture is awesome… ❤
I sends you a biiiiig hug ❤❤❤❤❤
Your comments on my site have been magnified 100x now that I see how beautiful a writer you are. I’m humbled 🙂
I love the way you write 😊❤❤❤
<3<3<3 Likewise
This is simply a stunning poem over a stunning photo. You continue to amaze me, really!
You make me so happy ….I thank you with all my heart 🙏🙏🙏❤❤❤
Your poems always make me think and remember. Beautiful images and imagery 🙂
🌻🍃🍃🌻🍃🌻🍃I thinks we ought to get our cameras and take a trip at dawn …and the gather around for some tea
Amazing games these words play and you seem to use them to fullness.
🍃🍃🍂🍃🍂🍃🍂awww…thank you
such aching and longing in this poem — and the final line is powerful
🍂🍃🍂🍃🍂🍃🍂🍃I have always longed for the name …❤❤❤
you are only getting better this is another lovely peace. 🙂
To be frank when you commented the words powerfullines under my haiku then only i realized that my haiku on jesus was an accidental gem 😛
Lines from deepest recess of your heart makes the reflections that more amorous yet nostalgic….lovely
A bench in the park longs for my return… Beautiful! I like to think there are a few benches in my city that pine for my company, as well…
🍃🌾🍃🌾🍃🌾🍃all I know is the one bench near the waterfront which offers me a haven of sorts…but iam willing to trade mine with yours 😄
Hehe funnily enough my favourite is at a riverfront too… Beautiful views!
Lovely ❤
❤❤❤thank you 💐💐💐
Very talented 🙂 keep on!
❤❤❤thank you so much
Your work is lovely and touching. I’ve missed updates and am off to see what happened to your notifications. Reading your words inspires me.
🍃🌸🍃🌸🍃awwww…big hugs…you just made me so very happy
Sounds like a fleeting romance that returns once in a while. It’s strange how people come and go from our lives. It’s those who come back we have to pay attention to x
And that’s so true….but the folks that never come back leave a hole of sorts that takes time to fill ❤❤