silly smiles on faces of children
gutsy winds and a sudden ballooning of skirts
rain on my face as i watch a darkening sky
the sudden lurch of a bus as it crosses a puddle nearby
watching the warmth of the day breathing a heartfelt sigh
your laugh spreads it’s own sunshine
even as you scramble to hold onto
the last vestiges of a dying day
one that came upon moodily and
recedes ever so reluctantly
fading into the evolving storm
I love the thoughts your poems evoke. Such lovely phrases. And cute pigeons – looking like ours, but not. π
I likes pigeons…I especially like them scampering about …makes me feel besotted ππnow then what sort of pigeons are yours??? ππ
We have the Cape Turtle Dove and the Laughing Dove (no really!) that are pinkish, and occasionally you’ll see a Rock Pigeon, that is redder and has a red eye. But they all “coo” π
Sigh!!! I loves me a coo… A coo could make me coocoobara soon ππ
That picture is stunning, and so are the images that your words created in my mind, once again!
I sends you a big hug πβ€πβ€π
Nice lines π very beautifully written.
β€Thank you anoop
That poem has a wonderful sense of atmosphere and emotion. Excellent! Great photo too!
I tried my best with the camera…I was trying to live your philosophy of spray and pray ππβ€β€
See!? It works!
Evocative words and beautiful image, paired so wonderfully. A pleasure to read and see.
Thank you kenn β€β€β€
Something deep and surreal in those jugglery of words….lovely to see your profile pic
Hugs and love chaitaliβ€πΈβ€πΈβ€
Beautiful kismet! I love the colours and this sentence “your laugh spreads itβs own sunshine”.
ππΎππΎπawww…thanks Elizabeth …hope the days been good?
Title, photo, poem–I love it all!
Does a leetle merry dance…thank you thank you β€β€β€π
Its beautiful!!!
Thank you …hope you are well?? β€β€β€πΈπΈπΈ
Don’t know which is more beautiful picture or that poem π
Awwww…thank you π·π·π·π·
Beautiful lines coined wonderfully.. Loved it Kismet.. π
πΊπΊπΊthank you vinithaβ€β€hope you are well??
lovely!!! π the photograph as well as the words!
Awwww…big hugs πΊβ€πΊβ€πΊβ€πΊ
The picture is such a treat to the eyes…love it ! and so are the spontaneous flow of words…. π
N.B. Nice display picture… β€
ππhugs and much love β€πΈβ€πΈβ€πΈβ€
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh I’ve been waiting for another post from you. You did not disappoint. Amaze. <3<3
why must you write like the mist every single time, especially when it can’t be just dawn and dusk all day? lovely words!
So if I was to venture out to kabini at dusk will I finds you there??? ππ
i follows the breadcrumbs to anywhere that hosts daybreaks with pixies π kabini is on my tumbler-list, hope to lick the salt of its air very soon π
There’s a group of folks heading for kabini as part of darter photography … Oct 10 n 11 and 12 …let me knows if you want to join in.
Wow sounds fun! Uhmmm yes? π π π
Okie then we needs you check this link http://www.darter.in/ππ
Yesss ma’am π aye aye
Do I get to play Asterix and go through a series of extraordinary challenges including but not limited to free falling and fighting off dragons to qualify? π
They will test your ability to make filter kaphiππand ummm like the bard you do sing….well?? π
Giggles. I know the fullest lyrics to “cotton eye joe” is all I can sings, jiggle my ears I can’t but I can tries π
Youuuu do know what happens to cacofonix don’t you …??? ππ
Uh oh (hides under couch and waves daffodils bouquet) π
I love your writing, so beautiful!
β€ππΈπβ€ππΈπthank you so much
The more I read, the more I want…from you. Read many blogs, but yours is bookmarked. you didn’t write from quite few days…busy??
π»π»happy Diwali
I’ve been running around like crazy on work
Hope all is good with you ??
Same to you dear. Sorry for wishing you so late. You had been running crazy for work…I on love π