you are the distant hills bathed in gold
the indelible web spun through stories untold
happy laughter that echoes in longish corridors
hazel eyes that capture myriad dreams
of silks in green and gurgling streams
if only i could be what i think iam
i wouldn’t search for you in mirrors at every turn
55 thoughts on “she wore flowers in her head”
Do you like Chagall?
Yes. Something divine in all his early work
Yes, he changed later to pointillism, but his early art was magical. How are you?
am good. It’s 3am and I am wide awake. I imagine the laundry is done as is the cleanup ?? 😄
Yes! I’m done being the made for today. I’m drinking some wine and working on music. Why are you awake?
I was reading and listening to music..it’s the nicest part of any day for me ☺️
It will be twilight soon, and that is my favorite time. Where dreams and reality mingle.
Am hoping you get to relax a bit and maybe play some music?
Yes, I am relaxed with my guitar just strumming into the night. And are you looking to the night stars with your tea?
it’s been windy today …so yes the tea has been a constant companion ☕️
We have snow – lots of snow – and more to come on Sunday.
Its now me up late staring at the skies!
aha! time to wish you well….and hope that tomorrow’s a lovely day 🌺
It will be. Do you like snowmen?
You’ve finally succumbed to sleep. Dream well!
Yes I did….I don’t even remember when I did 🌻
Soon it will be my turn. Will you have tea ready?
Hahahaha….yes absolutely …I shall☕️
I look forward to it…… with cinnamon….
done. Sleep well ❤️
I will now. xoxo
Beautiful…I love the picture too… ❤
Very.. VERY NICE..!! 🙂
Awww….thank you ❤️
Beautiful poem and lovely photo Kismet 🙂 I always feel very clumsy when trying to comment on your evocative poetry. You always make me think – long after reading your poem. 🙂
psssst…. You iz not alone. Me I don’t get much of it afterwards 😄😄
haha But so beautifully written 🙂
stunning description like a dream or distant memory
“if only i could be what i think am” really makes you stop and think. 🙂
aha…. I hoped somebody would catch that☺️
Lovely. Something about the phrase “longish corridors”… Takes one by surprise, but it works. 🙂
It’s what I remember most about my laughter ☺️
This post made me a bit sad 😦
Awww…I promise to make you smile in the next one ☺️
🙂 I trust ya.
Tell me kismet how on earth everytime you manage to write such brilliant lines.mirror means reflection and you just mean he is in you or he is you correct?wow you are making me think i am only a beginner in writing poems on love when compared to yours.This is so beautiful including the title.loved this very much 🙂
Awww…thank you so much ❤️
beautiful, beautiful, beautiful everything in this photo, and the poem of course, gorgeous! hugs
awwww…..big hugs ❤️
So dreamy! Loved the last line 😊
have a wonderful and happy week ahead ❤️
You are truly the romantic….
btw, I do have a quick selfie of me in the mustard fields
oh!!! This I have to seeeeeee …lead me to it 😄😄
Oh no…. I look like a frog in this one
but where is it???
Your words are making me think of the spring in the mountains and a nameless face… That’s really beautiful, Kismet!
how about compiling all your poems in a book and publishing it??
Awww…now who on earth would want to read the ramblings of a silly girl ☺️
a lot of them..and the girl here is not silly, quite wise actually.
Kismet… Your poetry makes me want to write. But I doubt I will ever be this eloquent and true. So instead, I feel. I feel every word with all I have and thank you for that!
Awww….you just made me so very happy. Much love ❤️
No joking, this is a fabulous poem and may be your best ever.
“you are the distant hills bathed in gold” is perfect…beautiful, sensual, original, touching, but sharp as a knife. Well done!
sniffles ☺️ you makes me shy.
Your poem expresses the feelings of longing and love so well! The line about hills ‘bathed in gold’ is exquisite.
“distant hills bathed in gold” “silk in green” “gurgling streams” – awww shucks daffys, it’s going to be a while before I visit the hills again, but this did me good. you did good, daffys 🙂
Looks like you are in a mood of writing rhymes … even better … 🙂