soulful and strong the the muezzin’s call, pierces the dawn
i stare at an endless maze of buildings fawn
the sun settles for an evening gone
a flurry of doves break from their twilight spell
flying over the spires of the dome high
i close my eyes
the lights dim down.
48 thoughts on “fade to grey”
A beautiful enigmatic, dreamlike verse. Very nice!
There you are….I hope your weekend goes well and that you are upto your usual ummm frolic 😃
🙂 Yes, frolic seems to find me on my blog. lol I hope that you are doing well. I so enjoy reading your words. You are amazing. 🙂 🙂 🙂
And for that I sends you big hugs 😊😊😊
Thank you! ❤
The aura of dusk which I can visualise through your words….bravo
❤🌷❤awwww…that sight of dawn is beautiful
Such awesome pictures!
🌻🌿🌻awww..thank you so much ❤
You had me at grey.
Are the photographs in your posts taken by yourself? Either way, they’re just as great as your verses!
🌷❤🌷yes they are 😀thank you so much ❤❤❤
Yaa Dusk is beautiful.But which is more beautiful?Dawn or Dusk 🙂
Actually when i searched for some other image on google i accidentally tumbled upon that pigeons flying around girls image.For some reason i kept it.Yesterday i wrote those lines by just looking at that picture.
Are you a dancer,singer or plays musical Instrument?Is that veena in your hands?I am from south india.Your dressing and all looks to me as you are someone from northern part of india.Correct?How is life there?
Anyway god bless and thanks for the like and comment.sorry i am a lazy person i have been here to your blog many times 😛
😊😊I like both dawn and dusk…specially dusk.
Wonderful arrangement of light, plenty of colours making the snap very beautiful. Beautiful use of words. I loved this post. Amazing, both the picture and poem. You are a very creative person 🙂
❤Many thanks and much love
Beautiful!! It would be a perfect piece to memorize as a centering manta. Thank you!!!
🌺🌷🌺I sends you much love
Exceptional! ❤ 🙂
🌻🌻🌻ah…am a happy soul for the day 😊😊
Such vibrant colours, both in your photo and in your words. Very calming. 🙂
😘😘hugs and more hugs
“The sun settles for an evening gone”
My favorite line without question. Nice write here 🙂
Awwww…thank you so much ❤
Beautiful verse there… Twilight spell..that’s a magical phrase for a magical time, isn’t it?
I love the sound of temples bells both at dawn and dusk…for me the best parts of a day 😊
love the colours and smells it conjures up!
Awwww…😊…I have an eternal love for tea
and you have a flavour of choice? 🙂
masala chai 😄
I didn’t expect that but yaaaay 🙂
Nothing beats the warmth that a masala chai offers 😀
as CS Lewis put it, “You can never get a cup of tea large enough or a book long enough to suit me,” I guess 🙂
A beautiful farewell. ❤
you write inspired and inspiring beautiful poems! I’m glad we’re now connected, you remind me of a very dear friend of mine, Zara – I think you knox her blog! kind regards 🙂
ah…hearing that makes me happy…a lot happy 😀😀
because it’s true & that you deserve such compliments 🙂
such ethereal intentions these verses seem to hop, skip and jump with! take a bow, poetess 🙂
sigh! 😊Iam just a silly child who starts the day on a note of adventure intending to frolic along the way…and ends up with umm garbled stuff !! 😄😄
it’s garbled beautifully 🙂
I like the sound of that…I won’t to be remembered for that 😄
“soulful and strong the the muezzin’s call, pierces the dawn “..the very first line evoked a tangible image in front of my eyes… love the short but precise description… 🙂
Awww…could you feel it too…❤❤❤ thank you 😊😊
Love the picture attached too..that being one of my favourite books… 🙂
It’s a beautiful book…images from it will stay with me for long ❤❤❤